For centuries important part of education have remaind reading writing and math. with the edvent of computer some people think that computer skill be made as fouth skill to be added to the list of education system. To what extent do you agree?

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Since the ancient period
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reading
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writing
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and mathematics have been the
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the education system
education system
and due to the advancement in technology
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computers have become
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So some individuals opine that
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which everyone know. I completely agree with
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skill
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about which everyone
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technologies
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computer whether
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the computer, whether
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computers whether
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skill
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requirement for many
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as banks
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company offices and other areas.
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does not have
do not have
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subject
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skill
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in masses
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In India a survey had conducted
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year, in which highest proportion of people who did not know about functioning were accounted and to cope with
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the government of India made Indian citizen aware about the need
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regarding knowledge and
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arranged free
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classes for them
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, if people have
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skill
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skill, then
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they can get good jobs as well and at the same time it will help them to be connected with technology
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So
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in my
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view, computer
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education should be one of the main
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subjects
which should be taught in schools because it play an
improtant
of great significance or value
important
part in everyone's employed life. To conclude, readi
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, writing and math are the main subjects which help in the progress o
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integral
  • computer literacy
  • digital fluency
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Math)
  • curriculum
  • digital divide
  • technological proficiency
  • 21st-century skills
  • pedagogical approach
  • inclusive education
  • digital literacy
  • critical thinking
  • collaborative learning
  • adaptive learning technology
  • educational disparity
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