The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 snd 2008.
The given four pie charts illustrate information about three sources for manufacturing
electricity
in four countries over the period of 2003 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
the high used sources for producing electricity
were fossil fuel and hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
in all four countries, while
the least was nuclear power
.
India was the number-one country manufactured
the greatest proportion of Correct word choice
that manufactured
electricity
by fossil fuel accounted
for more than three fourth. The Wrong verb form
accounting
second
country produced
fossil fuel Correct pronoun usage
that produced
electricity
at 56% was Vietnam. In contrast
, the production of electricity
in Morocco and Sweden was the lowest level, represented
4% of Wrong verb form
representing
total
.
Add an article
the total
In addition
, the most significant percentage of electricity
made
by Add a missing verb
was made
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
in Morocco at 95%, whilst the least was in India accounted
for 14%. Wrong verb form
accounting
Furthermore
, Sweden manufactured less than half of the electricity
by nuclear power
in contrast
with India
just 4%. Particularly, nuclear Change noun form
India's
power
was newer used in both Morocco and Sweden.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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