The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 201
The diagram outlines the frequency of having fast
food
meals by Americans
at restaurants from 2003 to 2013. Generally speaking, almost half of the
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Americans
ate fast food
in a bistro either once or more than a few times a week between 2003 and 2013. It is worth noticing that more Americans
chose not to eat junk food
as frequently as they used to do so in the past.
As the diagram suggests, almost one of
twenty Change preposition
in
Americans
ate junk food
daily at a restaurant in 2003 while
this
rate slightly decreased over the period. Interestingly around the same percentage of US citizens never ate at such
restaurants, as the data suggests. Again, around 17% of Americans
ate at fast-food
eateries several times a week and the ratio of such
people increased in 2006 before it dropped to just over 15% in 2013. Many Americans
preferred eating fast food
once a week and they constituted almost one
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one-third
third
. Their ratio, however
, fell by few
percentages over time. A similar percentage of Correct article usage
a few
Americans
had fast food
meals once in
a month and their ratio went higher. People who rarely dined at a fast-Change preposition
apply
food
café accounted for around 15% of the total. The increase in the last
two categories suggests that many Americans
who more frequently ate at fast food
shops had stopped doing so after a decadeSubmitted by israr91kmc on
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