The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 201

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 201
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The diagram outlines the frequency of having fast
food
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meals by
Americans
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at restaurants from 2003 to 2013. Generally speaking, almost half of
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Americans
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ate fast
food
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in a bistro either once or more than a few times a week between 2003 and 2013. It is worth noticing that more
Americans
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chose not to eat junk
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as frequently as they used to do so in the past. As the diagram suggests, almost one
of
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twenty
Americans
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ate junk
food
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daily at a restaurant in 2003
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rate slightly decreased over the period. Interestingly around the same percentage of US citizens never ate at
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restaurants, as the data suggests. Again, around 17% of
Americans
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ate at fast-
food
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eateries several times a week and the ratio of
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people increased in 2006 before it dropped to just over 15% in 2013. Many
Americans
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preferred eating fast
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once a week and they constituted almost
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. Their ratio,
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, fell by
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a few
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percentages over time. A similar percentage of
Americans
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had fast
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meals once
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a month and their ratio went higher. People who rarely dined at a fast-
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café accounted for around 15% of the total. The increase in the
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two categories suggests that many
Americans
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who more frequently ate at fast
food
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shops had stopped doing so after a decade
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, americans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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