The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 201
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as frequently as they used to do so in the past.
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rate slightly decreased over the period. Interestingly around the same percentage of US citizens never ate at Linking Words
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people increased in 2006 before it dropped to just over 15% in 2013. Many Linking Words
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