The range and quality of food we can buy has changed due to technological and scientific advances. Some people believe the range and quality of food has improved while others consider it may be harmful. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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Due to scientific and technological advancements, the range and
quality
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of
food
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, in
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modern age, has changed.
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there are some that believe these advances have developed and made various and
quality
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food
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, there are still who think it is detrimental to people’s health. In my opinion, the range and
quality
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of
food
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we eat
became
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becomes
better and more accessible for everybody especially to people who have
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allergies. On the one hand, people believe the range and
quality
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of
food
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has improved due to technological and scientific advances and I agree to
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. Molecular gastronomy, a scientific advancement that was not possible decades ago, is a part of science that deals with understanding the molecules and compounds that can affect the taste of
food
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.
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advancement has helped improve the culinary discipline and created better and healthier
food
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and drinks. The creation of lactose free milk, an example of
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breakthrough, led to the discovery of new recipes that brought enjoyment to people with lactose intolerance.
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, the view of others is that these advancements brought harm rather than good to everyone’s health.
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, the
food
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of today
are made
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is made
in
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a way that
chemicals
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the chemicals
in them would react to our bodies in a detrimental way. According to a recent study done by the students in Saint Paul University Iloilo, a number of
food
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and drinks today contained chemicals that are high in trans-fat, a type of lipid
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considered harmful to a human being when taken in high amounts.
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Trains
-fat,
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known as trans-unsaturated fatty acids, is made from bombarding hydrogen into unsaturated fatty acids.
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,
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method of putting hydrogen molecules
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of
fatty acids is a technological and scientific advancement
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of
in
the culinary arts. In conclusion, people’s perception of the
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today may
vary but
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vary, but
the advancements to it gave the society a better plethora of
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and drinks as well as having people who have had
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allergies or intolerance to
specific
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a specific food
specific foods
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, enjoy a
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variety
of
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that they would have an adverse reaction
to when eating it
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when eating it
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