Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time .Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Some people have an opinion that the parents should find time to indulge their children in activities that is done in group while others have the opinion that the children should make use of their time effectively by themselves.

Some people have an opinion that the parents should find

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to indulge their children in activities

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done in group while others have the opinion that the children should make use of their

time

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effectively by themselves.

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with, children are the most valuable asset to all parents. It is their responsibility to make them a responsible, once they are grown.Man is a social being

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each person should be socially responsible too.

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to become socially active, a person should know how to interact and interfere with the society from childhood. So, group activities that are done in done in schools or colleges will contribute

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their growth in becoming a dutiful citizen

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, in schools a free period is dedicated for extra curricular activities where students will learn how to interact with others and explore their talents thereby creating a sense of oneness in their self.

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, children should be

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learning

how to make themselves active without any external help.

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will help them to be disciplined and active at all

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makes them self-sufficient at a future stage. Encouraging children to develop themselves will make them to be self sustain without being dependent on their parents

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in western world children are forced to earn by themselves once they have gained an age of eighteen. In conclusion, children should be given an ample

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to explore the world based on their skills and talents and should be directed and channelised properly so that one day he / she will become a responsible citizen

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the country. My opinion support the above said statement that all children should be given

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time but

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time, but

direct them with the proper guidance and moral values.