It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to the remote natural environment, such as South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people now prefer to
travel offbeat
places Accept comma addition
travel, offbeat
such
as deserts and extremely cold mountains as exploration
of these places have become very easy now. Suggestion
an exploration
This
essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of travelling to such
places, and will finally
end with concluding that which outweighs the other.
As infrasturture
of many secluded places the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
have been improved
, Suggestion
has been improved
approchability
of visiting these places Suggestion
the approachability
approachability
have improved
. These areas are rich in Suggestion
has improved
flaura
and fauna and all the plant life in a particular region or period
flora
floral
therefore
have a lot of potential of discovering new species of them. Hence
, researchers try to visit such
unexplored places. For
instance
, jungles of Amazon has
great potential of Suggestion
have
such
plants which can be used to cure some deadly deseases
, an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
such
as Cancer. Therfore
, scientists try to enter the virgin areas of the forest. Suggestion
Therefore
On the other hand
, toursist
travel to someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
such
places because they want to experience the nature closely which is not possible in their daily life. These serence
not agitated; without losing self-possession
serene
science
sirens
area
Suggestion
areas
gives
an opportunity to them to appreciate the alluring nature which Suggestion
are given
help
relax their minds and Suggestion
helps
also
gives a break from their humdrum life.
On the flip side, as these areas are secluded, basic amenities such
as availability of water, small shops and hospitals are not readily available in such
places. Additionally
, sometimes it is even hard to find any human help around. For
instance
, some people like to trek to offbeat mountains but
if they need something there, Accept comma addition
mountains, but
first
aid for
instance
, it would not be available there. Secondly
, the cost of exploring such
places is very high as it is very difficult to reach reach
. reach a destination, either real or abstract
reach
For
instance
, a person who wants to climb Mt. Everest needs a hefty amount of money to do so.
In conclusion, though disadvantages of exploring unexplored places are some, I believe advantages are many and the things a person can experience there, he cannot do anywhere else. Moreover
, it can give him a new perspective of life and new ideas which can help when he returns back such
as starting new business
of travel blogging. Suggestion
a new business
Hence I
think Accept comma addition
Hence, I
its
worth taking the risk.it is
it's
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
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- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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