Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

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Currently many
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Currently, many
people choose to be
self
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employed and few people like to
work
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for a
company
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or
organization
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. The
idea
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behind
this
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is
mainly future growth
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mainly in the future growth
mainly the future growth
of their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
carrier
careers
and personality. It will be useful to develop their
self
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esteem. On one hand, People who are the
enterprenuer
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
and want to aim bigger in their life will choose to be
self
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employed.
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example people
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example, people
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
want to start the business either it can be retail or
enterprise but
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enterprise, but
there will be huge impact and
threat
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the threat
threats
to the career. The main disadvantage of
self
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employment is risk involved in each and every step of employment. It's
is
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been
better
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the best
idea
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to have
self
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employed but
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employed, but
would be bit risk to the job security. In my
opinion it's
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opinion, it's
good to be
self
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employed as it has
better future
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a better future
.
On the other hand
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, few people want to
work
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with
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company
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a company
the company
companies
.
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example software
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example, software
engineers who works for an IT
company
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or Professors who works for colleges or universities. The reason behind choosing to be working under an
organization
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is job security. The
idea
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for
this
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is good for
upcoming future
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the upcoming future
. In my
opinion it's
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opinion, it's
is
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been
good to
work
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under
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company
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the company
a company
.
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, Now a days job security is very crucial. It is
threat
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a threat
to both
self
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employed people and people who
works
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work
for
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organization
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the organization
an organization
organizations
. Many people want to have
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self
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a self
employed because it will be our
organization
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And there are no leaders for it. We ourselves will be leaders
for
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in
of
our own
organization
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.
This
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will
leads
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lead
to the better
idea
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which improve the
people
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person's
peoples'
career. To conclude, People who
work
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for
organization
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will live in a much comfortable way than people who are
self
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employed. In
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
days people will get to know which one is better than
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. That would be helpful to people to aim better and proceed
further
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accordingly
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.

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