some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and up the world's fuel resources. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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argument it

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argument, it

totally deniable and it is

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not banned for

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completely disagree

am completely disagreeing

have completely disagreed

with it.

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some people said that

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travel

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restricted for

pollution

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, not only

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travel

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which

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uses

the fossil

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fuels, but

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the other mode of

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a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

and industries are

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the serious problems to affect the

environment

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and create

pollution

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too.

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we knew that the

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damage

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from

pollution

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and global warming.

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the lots of family, many relatives are outside their country for different purposes.

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the

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will be banned

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what are the other transportations which help for them to meet

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of them or themselves

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family and for vacation?

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making

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silly causes to ban the

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travel

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, we reduce the other factors which will affect the

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and

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to save the

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like

burn

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burning

fossil fuels, less number of

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vehicles

on the road and so on.

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secondly

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, the

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change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically

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used

as a

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tourist

.

tourism

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Tourism

is the backbone of the country's economy.

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generally go

are generally going

for their vacation with family and friends to enjoy the nature, culture

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refreshment and a lot more.

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the trip

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priorities

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of

the major people.

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the

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travel, we

will not going to different countries for studying, business etc. To conclude, I

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don't agree

do not agree

with

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argument that the

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travel

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should be restricted for

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pollution problem

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pollution problems

the pollution problem

. Often, the industries and other transportation are as highly risky as

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travel

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and for the

environment

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too.

so

to a very great extent or degree

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for

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reasons

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reason

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am totally disagree

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totally disagree

with it.