Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's
world
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the issue of air
pollution
has become a major
concerns
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to metropolitan
cities
. I personally believe, there are two main
reason
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that harm our
environemnt
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environment
overpopulation and
greenhouse
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the greenhouse
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effect.
This
essay will discuss two problems and how to address them, using
relevant
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example
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from UK BBC
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and
Queenland
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Queensland
University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. Environmentalist experts throughout the
world
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advised that the
world
is overpopulation
in particular
main
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cities
aroung
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round
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with
low density
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growing
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.
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problem
causes
that
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the majority of
citizen
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citizens
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choose
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to live in main metropolitan
areas
as a result
of
lack
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a lack
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of job opportunities development and resources in rural
areas
.
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,
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empiral
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empirical
research by
Queenland
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Queensland
University suggested that
urban
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population has grown in importance over the
last
decade.
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is
due to
the fact health
public
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system,
facilites
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facilities
and infrastructure
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advanced technologies in comparison with rural
areas
. Consistent with
this
line of thinking,
government
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the government
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should allocate more public funds to rural
areas
with the aim of creating more opportunities for the local people and reducing the existing
problem
of air
pollution
in major
cities
. Another reason as
regard
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to
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the
problem
of contamination is the greenhouse effect. Major
cities
around the
world
started building powerful power
plant
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near
to
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residencial
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residential
areas
in order to meet the high demand
of
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electricity.
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lead
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to the process of
burn
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fossil
fuel
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fuels
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such
as coal, the
greast
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great
greatest
contaminated material.
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,
a
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article published by BBC
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showed that 20% of the population in Taiwan has suffered lung cancer
as a result
of contaminated particulars on air generated from the power plant.
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,
therefore
it is
not
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doubt that leaders
worlwide
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worldwide
should curb the emission rate by 20% in large
cities
To conclude
from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that
goverments
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governments
government
worldwide should work together to combat the effect of climate
changes
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and
pollution
that it is causing detrimental damage to
dweler
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dweller
citizens. In the
futere
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future
, there will be more challenges to overcome, but individuals
sould
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should
could
combant
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combat
and defeat the
problem
of environmental
pollution
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • urbanization
  • green spaces
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • exhaust gases
  • emissions
  • waste management
  • air quality
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