In today's
the issue of air
pollution
has become a major
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to metropolitan
cities
. I personally believe, there are two main
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that harm our
overpopulation and
greenhouseCorrect article usage
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effect.
This
essay will discuss two problems and how to address them, using
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exampleFix the agreement mistake
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from UK BBC
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and
University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. Environmentalist experts throughout the
world
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advised that the
world
is overpopulation
in particular
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cities
aroung Correct word choice
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with
low densityAdd a hyphen
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.
This
problem
causes
that Correct word choice
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the majority of
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chooseFix the infinitive
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to live in main metropolitan
areas
as a result
of
lackCorrect article usage
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of job opportunities development and resources in rural
areas
.
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,
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research by
University suggested that
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population has grown in importance over the
last
decade.
This
is
due to
the fact health
public Correct word choice
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system,
and infrastructure
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advanced technologies in comparison with rural
areas
. Consistent with
this
line of thinking,
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should allocate more public funds to rural
areas
with the aim of creating more opportunities for the local people and reducing the existing
problem
of air
pollution
in major
cities
. Another reason as
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to Change preposition
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the
problem
of contamination is the greenhouse effect. Major
cities
around the
world
started building powerful power
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near
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areas
in order to meet the high demand
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electricity.
This
leadReplace the word
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to the process of
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fossil
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such
as coal, the
contaminated material.
For example
,
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article published by BBC
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showed that 20% of the population in Taiwan has suffered lung cancer
as a result
of contaminated particulars on air generated from the power plant.
Thus
,
therefore
it is
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doubt that leaders
should curb the emission rate by 20% in large
cities
To conclude
from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that
worldwide should work together to combat the effect of climate
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and
pollution
that it is causing detrimental damage to
citizens. In the
, there will be more challenges to overcome, but individuals
and defeat the
problem
of environmental
pollution
.