Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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world

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the issue of air

pollution

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has become a major

concerns

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to metropolitan

cities

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. I personally believe, there are two main

reason

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that harm our

environemnt

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environment

overpopulation and

greenhouse

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the greenhouse

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effect.

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essay will discuss two problems and how to address them, using

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example

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from UK BBC

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and

Queenland

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Queensland

University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. Environmentalist experts throughout the

world

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advised that the

world

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is overpopulation

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main

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cities

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aroung

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with

low density

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growing

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.

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problem

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causes

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the majority of

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choose

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to live in main metropolitan

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of

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of job opportunities development and resources in rural

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empiral

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population has grown in importance over the

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decade.

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the fact health

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system,

facilites

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facilities

and infrastructure

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advanced technologies in comparison with rural

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. Consistent with

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line of thinking,

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the government

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should allocate more public funds to rural

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with the aim of creating more opportunities for the local people and reducing the existing

problem

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of air

pollution

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in major

cities

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. Another reason as

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to

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the

problem

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of contamination is the greenhouse effect. Major

cities

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around the

world

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started building powerful power

plant

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plants

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near

to

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residencial

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residential

areas

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in order to meet the high demand

of

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electricity.

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lead

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to the process of

burn

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fossil

fuel

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fuels

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such

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as coal, the

greast

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great

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contaminated material.

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a

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article published by BBC

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showed that 20% of the population in Taiwan has suffered lung cancer

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of contaminated particulars on air generated from the power plant.

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,

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it is

not

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doubt that leaders

worlwide

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worldwide

should curb the emission rate by 20% in large

cities

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from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that

goverments

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governments

government

worldwide should work together to combat the effect of climate

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and

pollution

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that it is causing detrimental damage to

dweler

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dweller

citizens. In the

futere

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future

, there will be more challenges to overcome, but individuals

sould

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should

could

combant

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combat

and defeat the

problem

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of environmental

pollution

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.