"Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

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Together with the
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
of the technology, the world is now becoming a more and more modern place to live in. Especially in
such
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developed countries, high-tech machines and innovations are adapted and brought into use frequently. With a reference to
this
Linking Words
, there is a statement saying that in these countries, environmental issues are becoming more serious, which can lead to global warming. From my point of view, essential attempts to reduce the dangers of global warming must be taken immediately. In terms of environmental problems, it is obvious that

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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