In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and work. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause.
Together with the development of the technology, the world is now becoming a more and more modern
place
to live in. Especially in such
developed countries, high-tech machines and innovations are adapted and brought into use frequently. With a reference to this
, there is a statement saying that in the future, we will spend most of our time on relaxing and hanging out instead
of working as a result
of the replacement of machines. From my point of view, this
can bring both benefits as well as certain problems.
In terms of advantages that machines will have, it is obvious that innovations have taken place
in different corners of the world, which have resulted in the frequent appearance of machines in place
of human
. Suggestion
humanity
Therefore
, machines have a great deal of benefits. First
of all, machines can carry out certain work that human sometimes find
it difficult to Suggestion
sometimes finds
fulfill
. put in effect
fulfil
For instance
, when mentioning about cars industry
, it is clearly that robots can do the work much faster, more accurately and efficiently. Suggestion
the car industry
car industry
Moreover
, machines nowadays are equipped with artificial intelligence so that they can have quick and percise
reactions to the work. sharply exact or accurate or delimited
precise
In addition
to this
, machines are extremely simple to understand and learn how to control them. Since they are programmed to follow orders, many tasks can be done quickly without any diffiulties
.
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
On the other hand
, this
can be a danger to the survival of the humanity. As far as we know, we are able to build up robots, machines, technology,.. etc.
. Suggestion
Etc.
but
we cannot predict what can possibly happen if they stand up to fight back. We can see from many fiction movies and comics about the fight between and machines. Suggestion
But
Although
it may sound a bit of unreasonalble
, we never know what may happen in the future. not reasonable; not showing good judgment
unreasonable
Furthermore
, accoding
to some research, working is a way to keep people in a good health status. If we stop working and have more time to relax, our bodies can feel exhausted of boredom which can lead to serious health issues. (followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
Moreover
, working also
provides people with chances to meet their colleagues and friends. This
seems to be a method to maintain the relationship among people as well.
In conclusion, I assume that machines bring to us both benefits and problems. However
, eventhough
Suggestion
even though
this
cause serious issues, development in technology are essential. In the future, if we can solve the remaining problems taken place
in machinary
, we will be able to adapt new high-tech innovations in a better way.machines or machine systems collectively
machinery
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