IT appears that the country’s wheat troubles are far from over

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The demand for
wheat
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flour
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as a major staple is inelastic.
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means that a hike, no matter how large it may be, does not reduce its consumption, or at least does not
effect
have an effect upon
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too much of a change in eating routines. In fact, people will cut expenditure on other items to pay for
flour
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. Little wonder
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that it is easier for
wheat
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stockists and
flour
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millers to raise their prices without loss in sales in times of both real and artificial scarcity — even at the risk of causing unrest among the people, especially the poor who spend more than half their monthly income on food. The usual suspects include corporate greed and/or blunders by the government that allowed the export of
wheat
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and
wheat
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flour
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between August and October despite a ban imposed on July 30. It is hard to blame a for-profit business
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exploiting an opportunity. But governments are expected to regulate the markets in a way that minimises the chances of anyone fleecing the people. In a country where more than a
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of the population lives under the poverty line, it is painful to imagine how the vast majority is coping with rising food prices rooted in rampant market greed and poor governance
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