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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, detailed descriptions of crimes could be seen
on
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in
 the media frequently. It is a highly debatable issue whether media should broadcast smallest details of a crime to the masses or not. Personally, I think that media should be very judicious in selecting what to report and how much to report.
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, the details of crimes make a misleading statement to the children and adolescents who are curious about the process of committing crimes, and are likely to copy the criminal actions blindly.
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, the rate of juvenile delinquency may sharply increase due to the influence of
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
.
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, the detailed description does not show enough respects to the victims and their family.
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, if any murder or robbery has taken place in someone’s house,
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 if it
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shows
 in detail on TV, the whole privacy of those people is lost.
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, some details of crimes are too cruel and make people feel terrified about their surroundings, some might even develop a distrust towards governments, which would impair social security and stability.
On the other hand
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, the opponents claim that as many details as possible should be published point out the demand for
such
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information
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by
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in
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 the public and the freedom of
information
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. Many members of the public believe that the more
information
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 they have, the better they can protect themselves from criminals. Those who believe in the maximum possible freedom of
information
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 think that it is the people’s right to be told as much as possible.
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, the press should play a key role as the
justicial
decreed by or proceeding from a court of justice
judicial
 direction of public opinion, and should not
overreport
get excessively and undesirably hot
overheat
 just because of a
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good
-looking audience rating. In conclusion, I think that the media have an obligation to show a right direction for the public. It should report news objective and balance, rather than highlight the details of the crime.
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