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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below
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The given illustration shows the result of
the
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adult education. Explaining why they are interested in getting degree programs in their old age.
Overall
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, the first one is a bar
chart
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 and the other is a pie
chart
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. The
chart
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showing
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shows
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 the result in percentages
according to
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 the interest of adults towards education.
However
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, the pie
chart
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 describes how the cost needs to be distributed. The given
chart
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 shows that people usually get admission because of the given reasons. Around 40% of them take admission because of their interest in a particular subject and to gain the desired qualification.
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, around 20% of them get into courses because they want to get promotions and try to broaden their horizon which helps them in their current job. Among them,
who
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those who
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wants
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want
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 to switch towards a new job are about 12
in
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percent
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per cent
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.
However
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, 9% of
masses
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the masses
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 only join the university to interact with new people. The pie
chart
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 describes how the cost of courses should be shared among individuals, employers, and taxpayers. The information gathered through the survey
mainly
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 divided into 40%, 35%, and 25% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • stakeholders
  • pursue further education
  • financial contribution
  • survey results
  • policy implications
  • correlation
  • adult education
  • distribution of costs
  • significant differences
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