The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below
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The given illustration shows the result of
the
adult education. Explaining why they are interested in getting degree programs in their old age.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the first one is a bar Linking Words
chart
and the other is a pie Use synonyms
chart
. The Use synonyms
chart
Use synonyms
showing
the result in percentages Wrong verb form
shows
according to
the interest of adults towards education. Linking Words
However
, the pie Linking Words
chart
describes how the cost needs to be distributed.
The given Use synonyms
chart
shows that people usually get admission because of the given reasons. Around 40% of them take admission because of their interest in a particular subject and to gain the desired qualification. Use synonyms
Whereas
, around 20% of them get into courses because they want to get promotions and try to broaden their horizon which helps them in their current job. Among them, Linking Words
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
wants
to switch towards a new job are about 12 Correct subject-verb agreement
want
in
Change preposition
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, 9% of Linking Words
masses
only join the university to interact with new people.
The pie Correct article usage
the masses
chart
describes how the cost of courses should be shared among individuals, employers, and taxpayers.
The information gathered through the survey Use synonyms
mainly
divided into 40%, 35%, and 25% respectively.Add a missing verb
was mainly
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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