The chart below shows the average delay in flight departures (in minutes) at different airports in the USA for five different time periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the delay in
flight
departures in US airports for time
periods from 1996 to 2000, from 2001 to 2005, from 2006 to 2010 and from 2011 to 2015 to Dallas
, New York
, Chicago and San
Francisco
.
The delays
have changed over the period
of time
from 1996 to 2015. On average, over the period
of time
from 1996 to 2015 the most delays
occured
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occurred
flight
departures to New York
. During the period
from 2001 to 2005
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,2005
the
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flight
delays
to New York
were over thirty minutes
. This
is the longest flight
delays
among the Fix the agreement mistake
delay
flights
to other mentioned cities and among other mentioned periods of time
.
From 1996 to 2000, the most delays
occured
in Correct your spelling
occurred
flights
to Chicago and New York
(over thirty minutes
). The least delays
occured
in Correct your spelling
occurred
flights
to Dallas
(under twenty minutes
) and to San
Francisco
(under ten minutes
).
During the period
of time
from 2001 to 2005, the delay times increased in
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flights
except fore
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for
flights
to Chicago. Delay times in flights
to Chicago decreased to just above ten minutes
.
During the period
of time
from 2006 to 2010, the longest delays
were in the flights
to New York
and San
Francisco
. As such
, delays
in flights
to San
Francisco
increased to over twenty minutes
. The delays
to Dallas
and Chicago decreased.
During the last
period
of time
from 2011 to 2015 the longest delays
occured
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occurred
flights
to New York
, and to
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San
Francisco
as well (over 20 minutes
each). The waiting time
in
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for
flights
to Dallas
dropped again and delays
in flights
to Chicago increased to around fifteen minutes
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