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It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?

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Being retired out of your job is the
time
, when the person is free from the responsibilities and daily work
life
. It can be said that
this
 is the
time
 in
life
 where people enjoy the most but I have a different opinion in that scenario. Some people are free from their responsibilities, but some, still have a lot which is pending as a liability, 'for which they need a job'. Many a times it has been seen that even after getting retired there are people who work day and night to satisfy their family's needs because they are the only earning member of the family and they
also
 have to take care of themselves from any forthcoming problems. Whereas, there are some sections of people living where after getting retired, they are free from their burdens and free to enjoy
life
 with their family and children. They have a new phase of
life
 which is utmost desired by many,
that is
 to spend some quality
time
 and enjoy while being alive, to relax and have the best
time
 of their lives.
However
, in my opinion, it's is not for all who feel the same way after being retired as they say, they are being retired from their jobs but not from responsibilities. In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
not everyone is happy and satisfied when they get retired.

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