Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree.

Many people think that prison is only way resolve the problem of
crime
. But, in my opinion, it
can not
can not
cannot
be the way to make people out of the criminal works. So, in
this
essay we can able to find most of the effective solution to
problems
Suggestion
the problems
of
crime
.
keeping
Suggestion
Keeping
individule
a human being
individual
individuals
in prison who
comitted
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
a
crime
can be another means of solution for
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
types of people. But, most of people
dont
do not
don't
never get right off the
crime
and there would be chances of increase in
crime
. So, it could be better if they educate through giving them different Trainings which later it can help them to find another job

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tackles root causes
  • preventative approach
  • critical thinking
  • decision-making skills
  • recidivism rates
  • equipping
  • socio-economic benefits
  • underlying factors
  • poverty
  • ignorance
  • lack of opportunities
  • rehabilitation
  • ineffective
  • higher rates of re-offending
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