All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

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has converted into a modern
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, as the
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is developing more and more medical problems are increasing
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as obesity. The people of all over the
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are confronting obesity excessively. In
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a solid solution
The major issue of why people are becoming chubby is, uncontrollable diet. I mean by
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is, the contemporary people don’t tend to look after their diets. They’re eating without any evaluation of minerals
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as carbohydrates
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calories and sodium etc. To tackle
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the individuals should aware themselves about what’s i
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the food they’re eating.
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econd reason
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The second reason
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problem
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is, lack of interest to participate in exercise and sports. People aren’t monitoring o
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physical activities.
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, If a particular individual does daily exercise
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as yoga and running or indulge in any physical game like football
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cricket and tennis. Certainly, by doing
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one will not put on weight. The solution of
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problem
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is, Govt. s
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create awareness about the importance of sports and games and the authorities should conduct town level sport competitions to overcome
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The third reason
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is modern jobs. The majority of people are doing jobs while sitting
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as software engineers, cashiers and accounts etc.
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, generations ago people tended to do hard working physical jobs
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as l
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a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
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they didn’t use to get chubby. But now the situation is totally different. We can overcome
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if organizations where people do comfort jobs, by encouraging employees to engage in exercise and by conducting sports competitions within o
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To sum up all the things, there is no doubt that people have been becoming chubby day by day it is due to the reasons
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as lack of interest in physical activities, not controlling of diet and contemporary jobs.
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is a serious
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and unless, we take steps to encourage people to adopt healthier l
ife style,
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
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the individuals continue to suffer from obesity. In my opinion, the main responsibility for solving these problems lies with people and a
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the authorities

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Obesity
  • Overweight
  • Epidemic
  • Sedentary
  • Processed food
  • Fast food
  • Nutritional education
  • Awareness
  • Stress
  • Emotional eating
  • Genetic factors
  • Access
  • Healthy food options
  • Marketing
  • Urbanization
  • Lifestyles
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