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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#life #years
Due to globalization world has been changing every moment.
Humans
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Human
Human's
 life has been
changing
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changed
 and have become
more mordanization
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more modernized
more modernization
 than it was 100 years ago. So, to my view, I directly agree with
this
 statement and I suppose,
present life
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the present life
 is better than earlier. Nowadays, there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of fascinating changes in transportation. Variety of vehicles are all over the world and they are modifying every
years
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year
 with many aspects and with new technology.
Furthermore
, there are
abundance
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an abundance
 of highways, high quality roads and variety of public transport which was not 100years ago. As
a
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an
 example, in Sri Lanka
asa
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
also
as
 a developing country in South Asia
have constructed
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has constructed
 three highways which is they had not 10years ago.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
Accept space
,
I think transportation has
adequate process
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adequate processes
an adequate process
 than it was years ago.
In addition
,
education
 has significant development than past years. Many people tend to learn
indipendantly
on your own; without outside help
independently
. A lot of students prefer to study by tutors and by online courses using a computer more than
face
 to
face
 studying with professors. To illustrate, the
hardward
 university shows a survey that, online studying is more effective than
face
 to
face
education
.
Finally
, change of
education
 positively impact for students these days. To sum up, life has been changing habitually in every field.
Such
 as, transportation,
education
, foods, clothes and etc.
However
, I think these contrasts impact on us positively and it
assist
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assists
 to easy going with our lives.

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