Developed countries have created many environmental problem. what can be done to have reduce the dangers of global warming?

Firstly
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Firstly, this
this
is very important to understand the basic reason of
this
difficulty.In well developed nations people always want more advancements in terms of technology
,
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,
feasibility and money.
For instance
, a large
nmber
the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
number
of industries
(
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(
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
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E
chemical
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Sugar
Mills
,
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,
plansts etc
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plants, etc.
plansts etc.
plants etc.
plants etc
) has been established from long time ago. Demand of
vehicle
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the vehicle
have been increased
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has been increased
drastically with the passage of time due to which more plants have been
setup
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set up
and more and more automobile
have been produced
Suggestion
has been produced
over the past year.
This
causes more
polloution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
polluting
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
their
in or at that place
there
is not
significant check
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a significant check
on plants and industries.With the increased of
population
Suggestion
populated
forests have been cut down and converted into cities due to
whhich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
air pollution increased very rapidly.Tree quantities have been reduced
continusly
at every point
continuously
due to which, Oxygen level decreases.
This
can
casuse
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
adverse consequence which is known as GLOBAL WARMING.

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