Some people think that museum should be enjoyable place to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of them is to educate.discuss both views and give your opinion..

Around the

glove

the 3rd planet from the sun; the planet we live on

globe

, every year many individuals visit

museum

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the museum

a museum

museums

and it means several millions in profit for

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amenities

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amenity

. Museums are public and private amenities that store items of great value for

humans

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humans, such

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as portraits,

paitings

graphic art consisting of an artistic composition made by applying paints to a surface

paintings

and crafts.

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these amenities help citizens to get

distrated

having the attention diverted especially because of anxiety

distracted

distorted

and learn more about its belongings.

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many people argue that museums should be more enjoyable places, others

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that the real purpose of them is to educate children and adults. On one hand, according to some researches carried

aout

away from home

out

by specialists,

humas

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humans

tend to learn more through enjoyment. Just as children learn while playing, so many adults prefer to do the same in order to increase their knowledge.

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, under no circumstance should learning places be boring. Setting a good example, many

teacher

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teachers

have

confirmated

of persons; not subject to change

confirmed

that is

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easier to attract pupils' attention by playing while the acquire new skills and knowledge.

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,

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technique is

funtional

designed for or capable of a particular function or use

functional

not only for

children but

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children, but

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for adults. But others think

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not the real

funtion

(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)

function

of

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places

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place

.

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, traditional individuals refuse to change the way that museums have been managed lately. The most formal and respectful is a learning place, the better for visitors have stated several authorities and it should continue as it has been.

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, some of them after a discussion have accepted that some restriction should be modified in order to encourage

citizents

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizens

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this places

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this place

these places

. Proof of

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, at the waxworks of the city,

chindren

a young person of either sex

children

under

certain age

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a certain age

are not allowed to get into

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amenity, so that many families select other activities

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of visit

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museum.

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, with the above in mind, in spite of contradiction among several inhabitants over the real use of museums, both of them agree that

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particular and public facilities are places to serve society while they acquire

knowlegde

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

and have a great time with their relatives.