The nuclear family is well adapted to move geographically due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many millions of individuals have decided to migrate to other countries in the las two decades. Migrations is moving from one place to another always trying to find a better lifestyle and enhance our present and future, and not always is a personal election.
Although
moving out to another city or country has disadvantages, I think that changes are a great opportunity to get new skills and betterment to current situations. Travelling to developed countries almost always brings plenty of benefits. By living in other country, people learn new languages, culture and people that will represent opportunities in the future. Due to several situations
such
as threats and poverty, people move across the world looking for better days, but they will have to overcome challenges throughout
this
experience that will be beneficial sooner or later. Proof of
this
, the family of the ex-president of USA Obama migrated around four decades ago,
as a result
its children had more opportunities and better schooling which led to success to one of them.
However
, real changes are difficult at the beginning.
On the other hand
, there
are
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is
also
difficult situation to be faced by moving out to new places. Especially children who do not completely understand why adults decide to make changes could be
the more affected
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the most affected
while they get used to
new environment
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the new environment
a new environment
new environments
, people and customs.
Consequently
, infants might suffer
of
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from
homesickness since they miss relatives and
friends which
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friends, which
may develop complications throughout their personal development. Setting a good example, a boy of just 5 years would not be able to understand economic issues and the cause of moving away from their comfort-zone, and
this
may bring sadness and challenges while he gets used to his new reality.
Thus
, with the above in mind, it is important to highlight that despite of complications and challenges, migrating to a developed country will always bright benefits not only for adults but
also
for children
such
as better educations and economic opportunities.
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