Communication is becoming much easier and more convenient between people worldwide, but more people are lacking social skills.

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In the present, communication has changed and developed faster than in the past. It is a
neccessity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
for negotiating, studying, as well as for anything else.
Therefore
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, people around the world must have good communication skills and their social skills should improve all the time
also
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,
such
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as: social
skills
Suggestion
skill
adjustments in
new social surroundings
Suggestion
the new social surroundings
, meeting people and creating good relationships with them. There are people who still lack social skills and skills to communicate by person, both face to face and on social media.They should begin with word expressions and behave themselves to adapt to people worldwide.
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, if you must change to work at a new company, you will encounter new places and colleagues. Social skills are a necessity for communicating with people. So, we have to try to be confident
,
Accept space
,
friendly, and smile at all times.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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