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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

#people #children #parents #house #adults #parent
Individuals prefer to keep their children close to them in the most possible way,
on the contrary
, some believe they do not need parental support and guidance and make
fortune
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a fortune
fortunes
 by their own.Being with parents forever can make a huge impact on children's
life
. Togetherness is the prominent factor
to
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in
 developed communities and individuals need their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
children's
 in regard to do so.Aged parents will always in need for moral and financial help.
For instance
, increasing old age homes gives
the clear
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the clearest
 view of
need
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the need
 of
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
In addition
, children
requires
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require
 a methodology to succeed in future through
life
 experiences of their parents.Another
example can
Accept comma addition
example, can
 be of survivalist Parents who can pass on these brilliant skills to successors. On the other side, children could be more responsible alone by challenging their capabilities.Accomplishing the basic needs of
life
 on
thier
of them or themselves
their
 own
,
Accept space
,
such
 as paying rent and food bills
,
Accept space
,
not only gives them self-confidence, but
also
 the key to success.
Moreover
,
freedom
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the freedom
 to live a
life free without
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free life without
 any interferences from parents will eventually
brings
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bring
 quality and satisfaction, eventually they will fell content. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
children and parents are two sides of a coin.One can't be left on their own in
this
 harsh and tough world, while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 will always require much needed love and support.
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  • independence
  • self-reliance
  • financial responsibility
  • personal growth
  • life skills
  • household maintenance
  • emotional regulation
  • social skills
  • financial stability
  • supportive family environment
  • cultural expectations
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