some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government's primary role. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The protection
resposibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of
envoirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
environments
is debatable.
some
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Some
people
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believes
believe
that saving
envoirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
from dust, pollution and some other sorts of
inconvinence
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenience
incontinence
inconveniences
is every individuals
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
while others do not, they say that it is up to
government
to secure
envoirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
from
such
things.
This
essay will discuss both
side
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sides
of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why
this
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
has to be shared between both
government
and
citizans
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
.
the
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The
first
group
says,
society
is shaped by a
group
of families living together in the same and
specific area
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specific areas
the specific area
a specific area
where every individual has
responsibility
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a responsibility
the responsibility
to protect his area. It should be added in parent’s job to teach their children how to treat
society
and take part in social activates to clean their
society
and planting.
For instance
, there is
friend
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a friend
of mine named Ahmad, who belongs to the same
group
of people with
same belief
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the same belief
same beliefs
. What he does? He carries a plastic bag with himself every morning from home to work and from work to office in return whatever he sees
in
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on
road side
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the road side
road sides
or pathways he drops it
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
plastic and at his
last
stop he put that plastic
in
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inside
garbage specific area. While
on the other hand
, the other
group
they have difference in their opinion and beliefs. They count
government
as responsible entity to protect
society
and
environment
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the environment
.
Government
as department
for
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of
each city as municipality which receives
monthly allowance
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a monthly allowance
from
government
for the purpose of taking care the
society
and cleaning it as their job. And
this
is their job to actively take care of these things in
environment
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the environment
an environment
.
Finally
, my own view on who should be responsible for safeguarding our
society
. I believe that
government
and peoples are intra connected with each other they have the same amount of responsibility in everything, because
government
alone can’t perform
this
task perfectly we need to support them as their employees are less
compare
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comparable
to the population of
society
.
For instance
, where I live every municipality 1 worker should work for 20 people of
society
.
Therefore
, I believe we should support them in protecting the environment.

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