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The maps illustrate the Grange
park
's previous structure in 1920 and recent view of that
park
. Overall, the
park
 retains the major elements of flowers,
music place
Accept comma addition
music, place
, sitting space, and entrance.
Converesely
Suggestion
Conversely
, a few things reintroduce in the garden, which are cafe and
child's
Suggestion
children's
play ground
an area where many people go for recreation
playground
. In the 1920, a stage for
astist
 was located west side of the
park
, and some seats situated in both
corner
Suggestion
corners
 of the north and south.
Next
, those replaced by the Amphitheatre for concerts with audiences place in recent days.
Besides
, there was a fountain found in the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 of the visiting place. Which converted by the rose garden, and bunches of seats build for the people currently.
Similarly
, in the north and east corner, there was a pond Located
in
Suggestion
at
 1920. Which, reconstructed to kiddies
zoon
in the near future
soon
, and a cafe rebuilt beside it.
In
Suggestion
On
 the west side the greenhouse vanished, and a
wathe
worthy of being treated in a particular way
worth
wave
 feature constructed for increasing
beauty
Suggestion
the beauty
.
Finally
, an entrance reintroduced with car parking on the corner of the east and south.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unique challenge
  • personal growth
  • mastery
  • accomplishment
  • demanding
  • thrill of achievement
  • pastimes
  • fostering
  • sense of community
  • mindfulness
  • stress relief
  • mental break
  • daily stressors
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