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Australian men and women who are doing physical exercise, analyze charts

#australian #men #women #exercise
Analyzing
Suggestion
Analysing
 the chart that we can
observ
discover or determine the existence, presence, or fact of
observe
 below, we can see percentages about the quantity of Australian men and women realizing exercises and physical activity
periodicaly
in a sporadic manner
periodically
. Talent a fast look at the chart, we can note that women are
mayority
Suggestion
majoring
majority
 in physical activity than men,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 between 28 and 64 years old, and since 34 and 64 years old, the percentage is up to 50% of females. But men are more active than the
women
Suggestion
women's
 group from 15 to 24 years old, by 5% more than same age women. We can
observ
discover or determine the existence, presence, or fact of
observe
 that
this
 percentage is getting equalize after 64 years old, when men and women, both are doing exercises between 46,7% and 47,1%
,
Accept space
,
 being females just less than one point upper than male group. The biggest difference that we can see is between women and
men
Suggestion
men's
 segment between 35 and 44 years old, when women are active 13% more than
men group
Suggestion
a men's group
men's group
man group
. In general, the
razonable
showing reason or sound judgment
reasonable
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
 Is that women
are more phisically able and have
Suggestion
have more physically able and
are more physically able and have
are more physically able and having
have more physically able and had
are more physically able and to have
 a better disposition to improve their health. Perhaps the cultural conditions, are influencing the way to see the body and the
differents
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
expectatives
regard something as probable or likely
expects
 in different gender groups, is one of the reasons.
However
, to start to promote better health and lifestyle between being humans and decrease the difference between gender groups is something that should be
analized
release or vent
unleashed
 by sociology.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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