In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important do protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this ?

In modern life, the big number of human beings are day by day higher, and obviously, the
phisycal
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
space is everyday less available. New homes, buildings and properly constructions for daily family life, are getting finished in the city, and people start to
thing
an instance of deliberate thinking
think
more and more in
countryside
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the countryside
.
This
essay is going to treat about
this
new problematic, is correct to start to build in
countrysides
or it is better to keep the natural views and landscapes?.
First
of all, we can
afirm
establish or strengthen as with new evidence or facts
affirm
affirms
that the number of people is going up every day, with a high number of population in cities,
unconfortable
conducive to or feeling mental discomfort
uncomfortable
lifestyle
,
immposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
vehicular
trafic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
and the stress affecting people health's, some persons are open their minds out of big cities and starting to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the idea of
build
Suggestion
building
in
countrysides
, probably looking for a better
lifestyle
and
a
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an
aflordable
that you have the financial means for
affordable
environment to see their children grow up.
On the other
hand we
Accept comma addition
hand, we
have the countryside,
this
natural and
pacefully
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peaceful
peacefully
place, with different kind of landscapes, totally different than city and suburbs, with
this
natural
lifestyle
and pure air to breath.
In contrast
with old
citys
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
city
kits
, it is an opportunity to improve the quality of life, and in my opinion, fields are the obvious choose of people who wants to live in quiet and natural respectful place. We can make a list of
good points
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the good points
of the countryside
lifestyle
, but there is an objection in
this
thematic as well, and it is that cities were, in the past, beautiful
countrysides
in some moment.
Then
the landscape turns through cities.
In other words
, people
has changed
Suggestion
have changed
the natural environment from
hills
Suggestion
the hills
and green grass, to buildings and concrete.
Therefore
and concluding with
this
essay, in my opinion and experience, I would like to express that I think that the starting to build in
countrysides
is a normal
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
between the big
cities
Suggestion
city's
cities'
city
mass.
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  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
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