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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sir, I read the advertisement inviting nominations
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 your award program “Heroes for the Society” in your newspaper dated 17th February and am writing in response to that. I would like to suggest
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 Raj Patel’s name for the same. He is a software engineer by profession and has been working towards
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sanitation and cleanliness in the city
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 five years. In 2015, he singlehandedly started spreading awareness and encouraging people to keep the roads and other areas clean. He
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 raised funds for the local sweepers and donated helpful tools like garbage pickers, gloves and protective clothing making their work easier and
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. In the following year, he initiated the cleaning of water bodies in and around the city bringing back the natural fauna.
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year, he has been encouraging people to segregate wastes into plastics and biodegradables for easy and safe disposal. According to me, an appropriate reward to felicitate
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 Raj would be monetary fund and more technical support as his charity mainly runs on his own contributions rather than donations. Your support will definitely help his mission grow and reach farther places. I would be happy to let you know more about his journey and work if required. Yours faithfully Payal Patel

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