You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to provide feedback and suggest some improvements based on our recent experience.
I had organised whole
day meeting at your hotel on 6th September 2019. Upon it end, we had collected feedback from our guest. According to the Correct article usage
a whole
participants
feedback, Almost everyone is extremely satisfied with the hotel’s luxurious design, Spacious room, adequate amenities, and Change to a genitive case
participant's
participants'
moreover
the location of the hotel itself. However
, Some of the common complaints in the survey were about quality
of food served. The food which was served during lunch was insipid and dry; the dinner was served cold and soggy.
I would like to suggest your hotel chef and Add an article
the quality
staffs
Fix the agreement mistake
staff
to
use fresh ingredients and make food on order. Remove the particle
apply
This
will not only enhances
the experience of the existing customer, but it Change the verb form
enhance
also
attracts new
crowd.
I would like Add an article
a new
the new
to
see my Correct pronoun usage
you to
suggest
changes in your restaurant and keep your reputation intact.
Yours faithfully,
Prakash PerumalReplace the word
suggested
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