You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to provide feedback and suggest some improvements based on our recent experience. I had organised

whole

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day meeting at your hotel on 6th September 2019. Upon it end, we had collected feedback from our guest. According to the

participants

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feedback, Almost everyone is extremely satisfied with the hotel’s luxurious design, Spacious room, adequate amenities, and

moreover

the location of the hotel itself.

However

, Some of the common complaints in the survey were about

quality

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the quality

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of food served. The food which was served during lunch was insipid and dry; the dinner was served cold and soggy. I would like to suggest your hotel chef and

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to

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use fresh ingredients and make food on order.

This

will not only

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the experience of the existing customer, but it

also

attracts

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crowd. I would like

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changes in your restaurant and keep your reputation intact. Yours faithfully, Prakash Perumal