happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

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Life, nowadays become very hectic
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
difficult to live in most part of the
places
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place
. People are living in poverty and in
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circumstances which make life harder.
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, these problems can be catered by
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happiness but
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happiness, but
,
sometimes it
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sometimes, it
become difficult to understand the mode of
happiness
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. In
this
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essay I will discuss some points to achieve
this
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. Due to
industrilization
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
and busy schedule people tends to forget about themselves. They got used to of the approach of industry to work for 9 to 10 hours with tons of tasks and
assingments
a duty that you are assigned to perform (especially in the armed forces)
assignments
to complete before deadline
subsiquently
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
subsequently
, which
make people to leave
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make people leave
their habit of healthy
lifestyle
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that, plays a vital role in
happiness
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. A healthy
lifestyle
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also make people to
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also makes people
also makes people to
live longer
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, it develops a state
to
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of
mind by which a person
feel
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feels
more optimistic. If one
become
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becomes
more optimistic he tends to achieve things more easily and happily.
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, individuals don't know how to define
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state of mind as feelings are harder to define
by
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with
words.
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, helping others and to do welfare of needy people
also
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helps a person to feel the sense of achievement like, we can take an example of Abdul Sattar Edhi, who helped the poor,
handicaped
incapable of functioning as a consequence of injury or illness
handicapped
, orphans and those
parent
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parents
whose children closes the door for them. Edhi helped all these people without earning a penny and lived a back-
drivend
compelled forcibly by an outside agency
driven
lifestyle
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yet, happily. In conclusion, A
lifestyle
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with sort of
happiness
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in it becomes, easier to live rather than a life which has nothing to be optimistic or any sort of achievement in it.

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