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happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

#happiness #life #factors
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Life, nowadays become very hectic and difficult to live in most part of the place. People are living in poverty and in
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 circumstances which make life harder.
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, these problems can be catered by
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, but sometimes, it
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becomes
 difficult to understand the mode of
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. In
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 essay I will discuss some points to achieve
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. Due to industrialization and busy schedule people tends to forget about themselves. They got used to with the approach of industry to work for 9 to 10 hours with many tons of tasks and assignments to complete before deadline
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, which make people leave their habit of healthy
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 that, plays a vital role in
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. A healthy
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also make people to
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also makes people
also makes people to
 live longer
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, it develops a state
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of
 mind by which a person feels more optimistic. If one becomes more optimistic he tends to achieve things more easily and happily.
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, individuals don't know to define
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 state of mind as feelings are harder to define
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, helping others and to do welfare of needy people
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 helps a person
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to feel
to felt
feel
 the sense of achievement like, we can take an example of Abdul Sattar Edhi, who helped the poor, handicapped, orphans and those parents whose children closes the door for them. Edhi helped all these people without earning a penny and lived a back-driven
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 yet, happily. In conclusion, A
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 with sort of
happiness
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 in it becomes, easier to live rather than a life which has nothing to be optimistic or any sort of achievement in it.
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