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Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?

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The evaluation process of national
growth
 generally carried out on
basis
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the basis
a basis
 of its economic performance. Whereas some economist argue that there are many alternative factors to evaluate the national
growth
. The essay will
discusses
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discuss
 about the important factors that related to
above notion
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the above notion
 along with my opinion.
To begin
 with, the factor
that is
 important for the evaluation of the national
growth
 is the infrastructure of the domestic area. It is
very important part
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a very important part
 of the
growth
 of any country.
Although
, current economy of the country might slowdown, the proper utilization of the infrastructure facility can boost it up later on.
For instance
, the
growth
 rate of Singapore is highly depends on its well-developed infrastructure; which attracts many tourists.
Moreover
, the cultural development of the
nation
 plays vital role in
country’s success
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the country’s success
. The culture bounds the citizens and creates harmony between them.
Hence
, a place having peace and harmony provides
fruitful environment
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a fruitful environment
to
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for
growth
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the growth
 of industry and economy
as a result
 the
nation
 will progress at
better pace
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a better pace
.
Furthermore
, the natural resources of the
nation
 are key factors.
For example
, the gulf countries consists of crude oil wells that brings too much wealth and development in that
countries
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country
.
Lastly
, the government policies
are
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is also considered
also
 considered as
trump card
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a trump card
the trump card
 for the
growth
 of the
nation
; the policies can govern the
administration
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administrative
 body in a right direction towards sustainable development.
Thus
, many factors are there that influence the performance of a
nation
. In conclusion, the government policy of the
nation
 will be key factor which influences the other factors which brings prosperity. In my opinion, the government policy is more important than others.
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