Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays shopping
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Nowadays, shopping
on the
internet
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like buying books, air
tikets
a commercial document showing that the holder is entitled to something (as to ride on public transportation or to enter a public entertainment)
tickets
and even food and beverages has become very common in societies.
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This
essay will discuss both sides of
advantages
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the advantages
and disadvantages of
this
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shopping method. On the one hand, there are many advantages to talk about I will
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make reference to
mention
some of them.
Firstly
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, the most beneficial advantage is that buying things on the
internent
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
is much easier than going to markets and searching for required staff
,
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,
it
just need
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just needs
a computer and
internet
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and you can find what you need in one click and pay
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with
your credit card and wait to deliver the goods.
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Secondly
, shopping on the
internet
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will make you able to compare the prices for many markets and let you choose the best for you without being
embarrased
feeling or caused to feel uneasy and self-conscious
embarrassed
of
salesman
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a salesman
who shows
you
of you or yourself
your
products you need to buy
.
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.
On the other hand
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, like every
things
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thing
in life shopping on the web has some disadvantages to be
care
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cared
about
such
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as
impossiblity
incapability of existing or occurring
impossibility
to check the quality of what you are buying or is it same as the photo which describe it.
Furthermore
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, if you want to buy clothes you
can not
can not
cannot
check the size and the real
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
of the piece
.
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.
To conclude, shopping on the
internet
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is more popular because of the easy way to use
it but
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it, but
in my
opinion we
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opinion, we
can use it for limited products like books and food.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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