Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is a good thing. While others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts

cities

quotes

cats

that

pelanty

a full supply

plenty

companies’s logo

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the company’s logo

company’s logo

companies’ logo

company logo

on the players’s

t-shirt

a close-fitting pullover shirt

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however

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sometimes

mor

used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs

thane

conjunction used in comparatives

than

one logo

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In my view

that is

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good thing

Suggestion

a good thing

if the player does no have any problems

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Companies

sould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

would

make some advertising to get a lot of consumers

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However

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they must

coose

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

choose

course

the best way for that. Some

pepole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that advertising in the sport way is

wors

(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability

worse

worst

than the others

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In my opinion is

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

ture

consistent with fact or reality; not false

true

tour

there

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

some advertising is about

bad

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the worst

the worse

thing or is not for children

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In other words

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, a lot of families watching sports

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poor

pepole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

therefor if there is a bad advertising

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as porn or

worst

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worse

they will see them

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addition they

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addition, they

would

increased

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increase

the

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a close-fitting pullover shirt

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t-shirt's

T-shirt's

prices

then

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will make a problem

between

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among

young boys who want the

t-shirt

a close-fitting pullover shirt

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shirt

and

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

parents

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ohers

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that it is

good thing

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a good thing

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I disagree

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

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expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

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not

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work out

evolve

involve

evolved

in any

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a distinct feature or element in a problem

aspect

aspects

else

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Consequently

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player

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a player

the player

players

playing sports just for the money or they do not have any jobs else.Even

thougt

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sports

sould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

advert

companies’s

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companies’

advertising to gain money but they can find

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definite article

the

other

out

way for that.

Over all

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Overall

soprts

an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition

sports

spirits

do not have to advert

any thing

an indefinite thing

anything

because

this

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a rational motive for a belief or action

reason

the earn a lot of money

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for

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

223 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
promote healthy lifestyles

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is a good thing. While others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

You and your friend recently went on a holiday together. You have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. Write a letter to ask your friend for a particular photo and say What is a problem with that photograph of yours Which photo would you like from him/her Why do you need this photo

Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Language teachers should concentrate on giving positive feedback when students do good work, and teachers should never criticize bad work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?