Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is a good thing. While others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
quotes
cats
that
pelanty
a full supply
plenty
of
companies’s logo
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the company’s logo
company’s logo
companies’ logo
company logo
on the players’s
t-shirt
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirt
however
sometimes
mor
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
thane
conjunction used in comparatives
than
one logo
.
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.
In my view
that is
good thing
Suggestion
a good thing
if the player does no have any problems
.
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.
Companies
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
make some advertising to get a lot of consumers
,
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,
However
they must
coose
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choose
course
the best way for that. Some
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that advertising in the sport way is
wors
(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability
worse
worst
than the others
.
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.
In my opinion is
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
ture
consistent with fact or reality; not false
true
tour
there
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
some advertising is about
bad
Suggestion
the worst
the worse
thing or is not for children
.
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.
In other words
, a lot of families watching sports
also
poor
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
therefor if there is a bad advertising
such
as porn or
worst
Suggestion
worse
they will see them
.
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.
In
addition they
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addition, they
would
increased
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increase
the
t-shirts
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirts
t-shirt's
T-shirt's
prices
then
will make a problem
between
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among
young boys who want the
t-shirt
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirt
shirt
and
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
parents
.
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.
On the other hand
ohers
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that it is
good thing
Suggestion
a good thing
.
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.
I disagree
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
sports
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
not
ivolve
work out
evolve
involve
evolved
in any
aspact
a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspect
aspects
else
.
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.
Consequaently
Suggestion
Consequently
,
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,
player
Suggestion
a player
the player
players
playing sports just for the money or they do not have any jobs else.Even
thougt
Suggestion
Thougt
sports
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
advert
companies’s
Suggestion
companies’
advertising to gain money but they can find
othe
definite article
the
other
out
way for that.
Over all
Suggestion
Overall
,
soprts
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sports
spirits
do not have to advert
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
because
this
reson
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
the earn a lot of money
from
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for
ohter
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
things.

Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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