Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

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may give more skills and others thinks that studying at own place is

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like INDIA they have less practical knowledge rather than having a book knowledge. So, studying in foreign countries

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to make them develop

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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