Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
that in the busy
world people
Accept comma addition
world, people
prefer to choose ready made
food
rather to cook at home.
However
, some people
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that having ready made
food
had both merits and demerits in their
life
. I think
such
the positive and negative impacts depend on the how
frequent
Suggestion
frequently
people are
stick
Suggestion
stuck
sticking
towards the market
food
.
Firstly
, people
choose
Suggestion
chooses
ready made
food
because of the busy schedule. In the city area majority of the people have insufficient time to manage their
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
even they cannot prepare
food
for themselves. In
this
case the office worker
depend
Suggestion
depends
on marked
food
or pre-cooked
food
. The advantage of
such
ready made is
food
is time saving. So they can work for extra time to get
more payment
Suggestion
more pay
.
In addition
, many
company
Suggestion
companies
and restaurants
ane
Queen of England and Scotland and Ireland; daughter if James II and the last of the Stuart monarchs; in 1707 she was the last English ruler to exercise the royal veto over parliament (1665-1714)
Anne
and
opened for the business.
This
also
implies for more job
oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
in the country. Even nowadays
food
services are
also
available in digital way. By sitting in anywhere we can
oder the
Accept comma addition
order, the
order the
under the
utter the
desire
food
using the internet application
from
Suggestion
for
mobile or computers. There a some disadvantages
on
Suggestion
of
choosing the
readymade
Suggestion
ready made
food
. Everyone will not sure what they are eating. They lost in the taste only.
However
,
readymade
Suggestion
ready made
food
brings heath issue in our easy work
life
.
For instance
, to prevent the
food
from
decrading
harmful to the mind or morals
degrading
decorating
they add some chemical preservatives.
This
chemical had
adverse affect
Suggestion
an adverse effect
adverse effect
adverse effects
on our health.
Moreover
, for earning profit many
company
Suggestion
companies
add less amount
Suggestion
add, the less amount
add the less amount
add a less amount
of protein and low grade of
food
products. In consuming
this products
Suggestion
this product
these products
we may suffer from different kinds of diseases and our
body do
Accept comma addition
body, do
not get sufficient amount protein. In result, we had severe problems on health, risk to loss
life
. In conclusion, I believed that whatever the work load. People need to be aware of the
food
items they
consuming
Suggestion
are consuming
consume
either ready made or home made.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: