Some people think that teenagers should be required to do community service in their free time as this would benefit both the individual teenagers and their society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The aim of

this

essay is to discuss some of the prominent issues related to student's community service after

schooltime

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school time

.

Firstly

, the essay will explain advantages for the

volonteer

tell voluntarily

volunteer

volunteers

and will illustrate the significance of helping other persons for the well-

beeing

the state or fact of existing

being

in society. From my point of view, I go along with the topic in force of the

deed whether

Accept comma addition

deed, whether

unpaid voluntary work is

undertook

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undertaken

seriously, it

allow

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allows

a steady satisfaction.

For instance

, taking care of elderly people, the teenager could realize the state of mind of some older relatives, so as to learn to interact in a better way with

their

objective case of they

them

. In a nutshell, volunteering

acktivities

any specific behavior

activities

developes

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develop

develops

developed

developers'

abilities how empathy, a crucial competence to spend in the job market.

In other words

, to bring a personal example, I worked as service costumer assistant for 9 years, from 2012 until 2017.

This

type of job

have changed

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has changed

my way of approaching people not only in the workplace but

also

in my whole life. Currently, I am kindly directed, to some extent. I

am became

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am become

am becoming

have become

finer in interactions with other people afterwards a discussion with a client. He told me not to look at him like that and I didn't understand how I would have been looking

to

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for

at

him. Only later, I realized that maybe I may have had a grim look. From that moment on I promised myself to pay more attention to the emotional needs of

costumer

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the costumer

the customer

costumers

, without placing my personal

fellings

emotional or moral sensitivity (especially in relation to personal principles or dignity)

feelings

failings

feeling

before. I haven't never had

this

kind of problems with

any

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

people, indeed my job has become easier. In conclusion, to have the opportunity to help needy people, enter in contact with their emotional perceptions, makes smarter emotionally, and

this

enable

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enables

one's work more competitive.