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Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring student’s performance and should be replaced by continuous assessments. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

#people #exams #student’s #performance #assessments
It is an irrefutable that every s
tudents
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student
w
ant
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wants
to be a higher m
arks
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mark
in e
xam
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the exam
an exam
but they have a fear of e
xam,
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exams
the exam
 it i
s seems
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seems
like a nightmare. Some people assert that to judge a people skills by their marks is not a
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an
appreciable. I totally agree with the statement and in
this
 essay, I intend to support my views before conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why children have worried about exams system.
Firstly
, As per Indian educational system, people think that it is not good as much as other countries. Because, In i
ndia,
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 the person who got higher marks they can get higher pay-scale and job satisfaction. There is no doubt, o
ther
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person who has extra skills than higher grade groups, which results lack of confidence and youngster move out in other countries. Whereas, countries like Canada
,
Accept space
,
Australia has their own education criteria, those c
ountry
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countries
compare their student b
h
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with
by
their skills.
In addition
, Due to
this
 counter measures, after 12th grade students try to move to the other countries for higher education which causes there are shortage of h
igh
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highly
skilled trade persons in i
ndia.
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 For an instance, according to survey, 70 percent of Indians after high school move to the Canada and other nations. The government of i
ndia
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
should take a
n
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a
hard step on their educational system, so that s
tudent
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the student
f
eel
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feels
comfortable and show their working skills in Indian multinational companies to improve e
conomy.
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the economy
 To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that g
overnment
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the government
should immediately find out the solution and enhance taking e
xam in different way.
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the exam in a different ways
the exam in different way
the exam in different ways
exam in different ways
exam in a different way
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