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Lots of people are throwing away food, what are the reasons for this and how can food wastage is reduced?

#lots #people #food #wastage
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As in contemporary world the use of certain things is increasing day by day, one of them is trend of street
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 and fast
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 liked by the people. Throwing away the excess
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 is the main problem in the world at
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 time. The main reason for
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 issue is the discounts and deals of the
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 items lure the people to buy more and more
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 exceeding the requirements, ultimately throwing away it, which results in
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 of
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. The other reason for
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 issue is
variety
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a variety
 of
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 items in the wedding and party menus usually leads to
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 of
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 as well. Above mentioned reasons were the main stream reasons of
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wastage
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 but the small measures on these two issues brings a drastic change in
major reduction
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a major reduction
 in the
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wastage
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. The
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 left at the end can be distributed in poor, nomads or people in orphanages, where due to the lack of
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 have brought the hunger and malnutrition in them. Distribution of
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 at those places can be useful as the leftover
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 is utilized and not dumped in the garbage for more pollution.
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 the
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 having by a person should be taken on the
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 requirements of that person so that the
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 must not be left wasted victuals.
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 way the
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 left at the end is clean and can be distributed fairly.
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