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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
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The charts above discuss two different
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pieces of informations
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informations
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information
 that we can analyze
togheter
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together
. They show us the results of a survey which asked questions to United Kingdom
people
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 about a variety of reasons to travel, and the most searched places to travel within
a
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the
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 period
to
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 1994 - 1998. The first
chart
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 demonstrates that during the
questioned
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 period
people
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 chose to travel for holiday
purpose
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 (an average of 17,700
people
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) and the highest amount of
people
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 that
traveld
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travelled
travel
 for holidays was 20,700 in 1998. Different
of
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 that the
chart
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 shows that there are a few
amount
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amounts
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 of
people
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 that
traveld
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travelled
travel
 for
others
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other
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 reasons
such
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 as business and to visit friends or relatives (
is
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it
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 was around 5,500
people
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). The
second
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chart
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on the other hand
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 detailed the information which is the most chosen places within the same period discussed
on
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 the paragraph above. As we can see on the
chart
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 the most visited place was Western Europe,
situation
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 that repeated all years, followed by others areas. An interesting
information
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piece of information
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 noticed is that the
last
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 chosen place was North America. By reading the information released in these charts we can see that
the
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most
people
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 came from
UK
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the UK
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 rather trips inside the European continent for spent their
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 times, than explore different continents around the world.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "informations" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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