IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrated how many car thefts
which
happened Correct pronoun usage
apply
with
per thousand vehicles and Change preposition
apply
this
graph was searched by different four countries in
between 1990 to 1999. We can clearly Change preposition
apply
seen
that Great Change the verb form
see
Britian
Correct your spelling
Britain
had
Add the particle
tohad
fluctuate
Wrong verb form
fluctuating
shape
of graph
Add an article
the graph
also
in
Sweden illustrated Change preposition
apply
increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
shape
and another countries
Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
France
and Canada had fluctuate
Change the verb form
fluctuated
shape
too. In 1990, Fix the agreement mistake
shapes
Britian
already had Correct your spelling
Britain
have
Change the verb form
had
large
gap with others. Add an article
a large
In
that time in Change preposition
At
France
and Canada had figures between 5 and 10 against with
Great Change preposition
apply
Britian
had almost 20. In detail, Great Correct your spelling
Britain
Britian
Correct your spelling
Britain
was
suddenly decreased shortly between 1992 and 1993. And it increased sharply until Unnecessary verb
apply
middle
of 1996 and 1997 and after that time, it reached a peak Add an article
the middle
as
20 too. In 1991, there Change preposition
on
was
Change the verb form
were
Correct article usage
the same
same
figures Correct your spelling
some
with
Swedennand Change preposition
for
France
than
they Correct your spelling
then
splited
Correct your spelling
split
with
two. Change preposition
by
In
that time Change preposition
At
France
peaked as
8 and after, it showed Change preposition
at
fluctuate
Wrong verb form
fluctuating
shape
. On the other hand
, after 1991, Sweden increased gradually and peaked the
highest figure in 1999. In Canada, it peaked Change preposition
at the
it
in 1990 and it decreased sharply between 1991 and 1993 after that it increased gradually.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words britian, shape, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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