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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so? Do you agree or disagree?

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Having a
neighbors
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neighbour
neighbours
are
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is
 very important, because we often see whenever we need something or we need help
first
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
 will show up than our family and friends will come. Nowadays people are very much into
profits
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profit
 relationships if they see profit in
you than
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you, then
you then
 they will keep relationships with you
otherwise
 they won't even ask you your name,
mostly
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most
 western country people are more conservative in nature and they are very choosy with their relationships, whether its
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
 or friends. In past people used to keep relationships with everyone
inspite
 to their language, colour and caste people used to do Hi Hello often visit
eachother's
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each other's
 homes because they used to value
relationships but
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relationships, but
 nowadays we don't see
this
 kind of effort from people, people are becoming selfish and arrogant in
nature so
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nature, so
 don't value their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
 one more thing is there nowadays people start competing with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
this
 is a main thing which is keeping
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
 away from
eachother
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each other
. I really feel people should start having
healthy relationship
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a healthy relationship
healthy relationships
 with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
.

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