Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, many people argue that works of

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or historical remnants can be observed online;

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, the necessity of traditional museums and

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galleries is denied.

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can be a sound

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to me personally, I disagree with

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opinion since museums or galleries are still of great importance in the modern world and justifications are as follows. There is a wide array of reasons that account for the magnitude of

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museums, but

the most prime one is that humans are given the opportunity to contemplate great

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works.

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to hectic schedule at work or at school, it is likely that the exclusively designed space and ambience in museums or galleries may act as a hub for entertainment and it will help people feel relaxed.

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, having real experience of seeing history-related objects or famous artworks will generate inspiration or new sources of ideas for those who are not only in the field of

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or history but

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for people in other professions. The

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reason is that museums and galleries help us develop a sense of respect towards history and

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of our own country or other countries in the world. Admiring real historical objects or artworks can help people learn more about their own country’s history and aesthetic field

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making them cherish part of their national identity.

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, the sophistication of

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or the intensity of war will be shown, which enable people to experience the authenticity that cannot be seen on the Internet. The most conspicuous case-in-point is when one can observe the real “Mona Lisa” at the museum, it may be a valuable cultural experience that hardly anything can compare. In summary,

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some people may claim that museums or

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galleries are not necessary in the modern world, I am still in

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of the opinion that they still play a

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