Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the idea that students’ sports activities and

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libraries should be funded equally. Of course, the importance of sport for student is indisputable, but it cannot be the main priority of a

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education

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.

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and foremost,

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the library

is the most important part of a

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. A

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may not have a stadium, there is no

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without a library. Students gain their knowledge mainly through libraries. The time in class is very limited. Teachers just give methods, comments, and sources of knowledge. Students have to

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and research these sources by themselves, outside of class. There is no appropriate

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place to study

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than at a library. It provides student convenience with huge collections of book and a large amount of modern learning tools. Indeed, libraries are indispensable to both schools and students.

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,

libraries

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library

system are not only the most

important but

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important, but

also

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the costliest part of a

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. Today, in

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an

information society, the students’ demand for information is great. It requires libraries to update their facilities continuously. These facilities include many high-tech tools and equipment. It costs a large

number

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amount

of capital to buy these things.

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, almost

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libraries allow students to stay late to

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study especially

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study, especially

in

examination period

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the examination period

. A significant finances must be used to pay staffs working at night. For these reasons, a strong budget is needed to maintain and develop libraries.

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but not least, spending the same amount of money on

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sport

actives as

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at

libraries, universities

face

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the risk of decline of prestige.

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The budget

A budget

of a

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is not limitless. Dividing money equally to sports and to libraries means giving less money to libraries than usual.

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, the research and

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activities will be affected. If the

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quality of a

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decreases, it will become less attractive in the eyes of prospective students and their parents. The prestige of a

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depends on

quality

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the quality

of

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and research

instead

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of sport records. All in all, what students need the most in their college

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is academic knowledge. Sports is needed, but it is always the secondary concern in financial policies.

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, the

first

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priority is to invest in academic

facilities especially

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facilities, especially

libraries other than in sport activities.