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nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars why is this happening ? is this development is positive or negative?

#intelligence #drive #cars #development
Artificial
intelligence
is increasingly play
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has increasingly played
increasingly plays
 a role for
drive
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driving
 cars.
This
 is due to advancements in
technology
 and it should be seen as a positive development as it reduces much physical work while driving a vehicle.I will elaborate my views in the following paragraphs To
initate
bring into being
initiate
imitate
 with, use of artificial
intelligence
 is extremely popular in cars because
abundant
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the abundance
abundance
 of advance technologies are developing day by day
which
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Which
 is very useful.In
this
technology
, there is the artificial independent machine work as a human for
drive
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driving
 a car and some automated
features
Accept comma addition
features, for
for example
,
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,
 many automobile companies like tesla launched the
auto pilot
a cognitive state in which you act without self-awareness
autopilot
 mode in cars in which person role is zero and car is
drive
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driven
 by the feature of artificial
intelligence
 with the help of sensors and all techniques.
Furthermore
,
majority
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the majority
 of people prefer to buy
this
 type of
technology
 because it reduces
teh
definite article
the
 efforts which have been done by driving the vehicle
Moreover
, it
also
 helpful for the
emergencies
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emergency
purpose
Accept comma addition
purpose, for
for instance
, if person have lack of experience or problem related health
then
this
 artificial
intelligence
 aid in many
purpose
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purposes
 as by clicking on the auto pilot mode and set location where he or she wants to go that will take
drive
 the car and park to their location.
conclusively
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Conclusively
,
Accept space
,
artificial
intelligence
 has made
people
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peoples'
 life easier and
this
 type of
technology
 using in all over the world because its the positive inventions towards science and community and it has
lot
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lots
 of
good aspects
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the better aspects
better aspects
 than limitations.

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