The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to the recent research conducted around the globe, the data which

was received

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were received

confirmed that

number

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the number

a number

numbers

of older people have been raised as compared to

the young

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younger

the younger

ones.

That is

why some people argue that it will create an inappropriate effect on their country plus increase problems. Perhaps,

on the other

hand some

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hand, some

still believe that they are still really important for the society. Based on the survey's many of the organisations are now disowning the old professionals as they consider them as a

tradational

consisting of or derived from tradition

traditional

mind-set

employees

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employee

with less efficient abilities of creative thinking and up to date ideas.

Furthermore

, aged people are not able to

activily

in an active manner

actively

participate in social working programs.

Therefore

, many of us tend to believe that they are

least essential

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less essential

for the society, as young generation can be really helpful in managing all

type

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types

of social activities.

However

, on the other side some people still consider

this

group to be a crucial part of the society,

moreover

, any country of even

a

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an

organisation would be

indespensible

not to be dispensed with; essential

indispensable

without

this

group. Whether, it any company or a state, the necessary need for the experienced professionals will always be required for the training of young talent. No matter, how less efficient the aged people are their

requirement

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requirements

will always be

their

in or at that place

there

, as they are the ones who are aware of all the dynamics of any place.

For instance

, young talent will always be remarkable at generating ideas, but the old one knows how to critically implement it at the proper time. In my honest opinion, utilising every age group at their suitable place can never let any type of problem to be

raise

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raised

. Experience is always praised as young talent is welcome anytime, occupying them at

right place

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the right place

at the correct time can be effective around the globe.