overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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We can’t deny that people from the villages have tendered to immigrate to municipal areas because of looking for jobs or a better life.
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has led to a
population
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explosion of urban areas
that is
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one of the biggest issues today. In my opinion,
overpopulation
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has an effect on natural resources, environment...
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therefore
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Therefore
, I think we should find out about
overpopulation
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and have some effective solutions to settle
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problem. Human
overpopulation
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is one of the main causes of the depletion of natural resources.
Overpopulation
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results in increasing demands for using resources, especially non-renewable resources
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as crude oil, fossil fuels, coal, natural gas... So that, natural resources are declining. Not only that, growing numbers of people
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cause environmental damage
such
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as pollution, deforestation, sewage… There are more industry zones, emission from the burning fossil fuels brings about air pollution. People cut down forests to occupy land to construct accommodations or cultivate. It is important for governments
to have
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have
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control methods. They can raise public awareness about
planning family
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planning, family
to control the rate of
population
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.
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, better education
also
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plays a vital role in human knowledge.
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, families that are facing a hard life and they decide to have three or four children.
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will make family life more difficult and may not be eligible to grow these children.
providing
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Providing
sex education in schools should be
must
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moist
. Parents and teachers should educate students to understand correctly about sex education, and help them to avoid looking for wrong information on the internet or discussing it with their friends. Individuals must take responsibility to follow the rules and educate themselves. Everyone should know clearly about the effects of
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and cooperate with governments to solve these problems. In conclusion, we are facing too many serious problems due to
population
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explosion and governments and individuals should join hands to settle these issues effectively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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