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in the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, the development of
technology
 for education has changed traditional methods of teaching in schools. Many people think that students no more need to be present at lectures, due to the development of
technology
. In my opinion,
technology
 in education has both benefits and disadvantages. On the one hand,
technology
 dominates over convenience and diversity. An outstanding advantage of online learning is you can join a class to
study
 anywhere and anytime. It is suitable for people who have difficulty in arranging time and finding places to
study
. Students can
study
 via computers or smart phones connected to the internet. In online classes, you can choose any lessons you are interested in to
study
first
.
Besides
, students can do the tests online
instead
 of writing by hand
On the other hand
, teachers can stimulate student's interest and keep them focused on studying. If students wonder about the lessons, teachers have ability to answer your questions clearly than internet can do.
Moreover
, attending lectures can create an environment for students to communicate with others. Students not only learn academic subjects, but
also
 learn social skills from teachers and friends.
Besides
, schools must spend a lot of money on investing modern learning facilities
such
 as computers, projectors… Both attending lectures and online lectures have their own advantages. I believe that it will be better if these methods combined properly, the quality of education will be higher.
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