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As discussed regarding the revised date of joining, It would be very kind of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my Date Of Joining, since I have enrolled for NISM VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in anticipation.

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As discussed regarding the revised
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 of joining, It would be very
kind
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 of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my
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Date
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 Of Joining, since I have enrolled for
NISM
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 VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in
anticipation
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. As discussed regarding the revised
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date
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 of joining, It would be very
kind
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 of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my
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Date
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 Of Joining, since I have enrolled for
NISM
Use synonyms
 VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in
anticipation
Use synonyms
. As discussed regarding the revised
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date
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 of joining, It would be very
kind
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 of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my
Use synonyms
Date
Use synonyms
 Of Joining, since I have enrolled for
NISM
Use synonyms
 VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in
anticipation
Use synonyms
. As discussed regarding the revised
Use synonyms
date
Use synonyms
 of joining, It would be very
kind
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 of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my
Use synonyms
Date
Use synonyms
 Of Joining, since I have enrolled for
NISM
Use synonyms
 VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in
anticipation
Use synonyms
. As discussed regarding the revised
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date
Use synonyms
 of joining, It would be very
kind
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 of you to consider 27th February 2020 as my
Use synonyms
Date
Use synonyms
 Of Joining, since I have enrolled for
NISM
Use synonyms
 VIII on 26th February 2020. Thanking you in
anticipation
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.

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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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